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  1. Patricia 03/02/2015 at 11:52 am |

    To me this poem seems warm, cozy and in a safe place.

  2. Maggie Brooks 03/02/2015 at 1:19 pm |

    Your poem does not seem dark at all. I love the second stanza. Describing night as a welcomed guest speaks to a lot of people, especially teachers, because we usually cannot wait for nighttime. My bedtime has been getting earlier and earlier…sometimes I question whether it’s too early to go to bed because it is still light out!

  3. Taylor J. 03/03/2015 at 6:20 pm |

    I love this poem! I tried to write a poem, but it wasn’t nearly as good as this! It makes me feel warm inside!

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