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  1. Patricia Holloway 03/23/2013 at 12:15 am |

    Very nice, I really like this idea.

  2. Kelly Mogk 03/23/2013 at 12:40 am |

    Just adore this! 🙂 Each word so perfectly chosen. Love, love, love.

  3. Paul (birdsandtreesofthemind) 03/23/2013 at 2:43 am |

    This is a well-crafted piece! A great exercise because it puts you squarely in the world of metaphor. Your first stanza sets the table with concrete imagery (and a nice bit of alliteration); the last stanza is just superb in using an image to mingle the contrasting elements of your poem. Awesome! 🙂

  4. Deb 03/23/2013 at 7:55 am |

    I LOVE this poem. You capture the longing for spring and its rightful entry with the slow passing of winter. Lovely.

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